You bring me to my knees You make me testify, You can make a sinner change his ways, Open up your gates cause I can’t wait to see the light, And right there is where I wanna stay–Bruno Mars
The lovers grope for each other in the darkened theater. On the screen before them there are intermittent flashes of light as the actors move about their scenes. The couple pays no mind to what story is being portrayed though. All they know is here and now. Their hands reach for purchase of body parts. Their lips do the same. He kisses her neck. She pulls his left hand to her mouth and deliberately licks his open palm. She tastes salt and butter from the long forgotten bag of popcorn that lays scattered around their feet. There’s music and dialogue streaming from the surround sound speakers. However, it is muffled by the sound she makes in her throat as he licks then bites her neck.
“You bit me, you fucker,” she angrily whispers in his ear.
“Would you like me to stop?” , he questions as his mouth hungrily sucks an ear lobe.
“Absolutely not,” she moans. “Keep going.”
She kisses his lips and slides her tongue into his mouth. He sucks it while his hand finds her right breast. He pulls the nipple taut through the cotton of her simple t-shirt. She arches her back to feel his fingers. To feel. More. She reaches for the front of his jeans and feels his fiery need for her.
“Do you want me?”, she inquires.
“More than you can imagine,” he states.
“Take me here,” she breathes.
“I’ll take you anywhere and everywhere. You will always say yes to me.”, he commands.
She responds, “yes. I will.”
She knows she’ll keep the promise. With all her heart and body she will. He continues to caress her breast. The desire she feels for him spreads to her loins. She feels the flood in her pussy begin. How sweet the ache of want is. She reaches for the zipper of his jeans and slowly lowers it. Next she unbuttons them. She kneels on the sticky floor and takes his cock into her mouth. His hands caress her hair and he mutters expletives and words of love at the same time.
“Look up at me”, he says and gently brushes two fingers tips across her right cheek.
Her blue eyes sparkle and dance when she honors his request. He sees this beauty before him, worshiping him with her mouth and he knows, she has no idea of her worth.
“You are beauty. You are warmth. You are mine,” he murmurs.
Her response to his words is to wrap her hand around him as she tastes his flavor of desire. He leans his head back and feels her mouth. Her hand. The heat of her tongue.
“Damn woman, you are so good to me.”, he says into the dark.
His hands pull her hair gently as he gets closer to release. His body tenses and hips jut forward. It’s all he can do to keep from screaming her name. She keeps working her magic. She is relentless in her pursuit to his end. To his “La petite mort”. Her hand becomes a blur as does her mouth. He can no longer hold back. His balls draw up and he gently holds her face to his cock. He release his nectar into her mouth. She waits for the last spasm and swallows the salty mixture. He withdraws from her and smiles. He draws her into his arms and kisses her softly on the lips.
Grinning in the darkness he says, “let me take you home so I can fuck you properly.”
She kisses him back while he zips and buttons his pants.
“Love, you can take me anywhere and everywhere. Your answer to me will always be yes.”, she demands.
He responds simply, “yes, it will.”
WOWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Does that mean you liked it sweetie?
Love, Renee
Ha – of course!
Thanks my sweet.
une bonne fille
Yes darling, very much so. ❤
Love, Renee
une bonne fille 😉
Delicious. (I miss my husband now and I can’t do anything to him until tomorrow)
Oh honey, good thing you have tomorrow.
Love, Renee
Lovely. Definitely enjoyed this.
That is quite a compliment coming from you my love. Thank you.
Kisses, Renee
This is gorgeous Renee. i loved “How sweet the ache of want is.”
Thanks my dear friend. I have to say that line was my favorite too. Where do these words come from RG? I guess it’s best not to question and just go with it huh?
Kisses, Renee
If we knew that then writing would be so much easier…
Maybe not. Maybe it would lead us to madness. Some things are better kept a mystery…
XOXOXOXO
Mmm…that was so sweet and unhurried. Makes me want to…no, I mustn’t. *slaps hand* not at work.
Makes me kinda want also. Glad you liked it my sweet.
😉 Thanks for saying it was unhurried. I always worry that my erotica is too urgent since I write in present tense. Tense being the operative word. Giggle.
Love, Renee
I have to grit my teeth and not hurry towards the end. My little ‘reward’ is always waiting for me, so I force myself to press on. Release and bliss…
When I re-read it the next day, I often have to add senteces to sloooow it down as I have been bad and hurried too much. 😉
Oh honey I’m with you on that. That’s the beauty of writing. We can always revise. For each revision, we can ‘reward’ ourselves too. Giggle.
XOXOXOXO
A ‘little reward’ and a shower and I feel wonderful…
Amen my sweet. Amen. And then a nap.
Mmmm…but not right now. I have another story to write. 🙂
Oh honey, I can’t wait to read you. I’m sure you’ll inspire me.
I’m thinking of posting on of my shorter works on a page for everyone to enjoy. I thought it might be too racy for wordpress, but as I can see that many others are doing something similar (yourself included), I will set it up. Watch out for ‘Annie’s diary’ soon.
I’ve read stories on WP that make my head spin and my body quiver. Bring it on!
Holy crap hot giggidy! Excuse me, I’ll be back in fifteen minutes. “Honey, meet me in an empty theater in two minutes!”
You got it babe. Glad you liked it. It made me a little warm and tingly when I wrote it. Thanks for your sweet comment. I’m glad you liked the story. I loved writing it.
Love, renee
good thing my boyfriend isn’t here, ’cause damn…. I’d jump those poor boy’s bones :3
This post got me so hot and heavy x
That was the point. Hahahaahah!
haha, well, he’ll sure feel it this weekend :p
I’ll tell him to thank you for that 😉 *wink* x
Giggle.
by the way, before I forget; what’s the name of the Bruno Mars song? x
Locked out of heaven. xoxoxox
thanks! x